上海中考英语145分之作文低档变A档篇之体育周比赛男生适用

学生原文：

The sports week

During the sports week. I join in the basketball finals. It was so exciting. Before the game, we would win easily, but it proved wrong. At the beginning of the games, the opponent scored one point even before we had figured it out. We quickly calmed down. We organized attacks, passed the ball and shot at the basket. I went dribbling several times, but without shooting a good. How pity it was! Luckily, my teammates made a few successful shots. Finally, the score came to four to four. We had to free throw. Through several rounds, I finally threw the ball into the basket. How thrilling it was! Although we won this game, we can't be proud. We should practice more and we will play better!

修改后：

During the school sports week, our class made it to the basketball final without much difficulty. As a team member, I was so excited and thought we would win easily. However, it proved (us) all wrong（事实证明我们都错了）. At the beginning of the game, the opponents got three points even before we figured out（弄清楚） what had happened. We quickly calmed down. We organized attacks.We passed the ball and tried shooting at the basket. I dribbled（运球）past two defenders(防守队员）, but missed the shot. How pity it was！Luckily, my teammates made a few successful shots. At the end of the game, when there was only 10 seconds left, the score came to four to four. It seemed that it would be a tie（平局）, but we didn't give up. My teammate found me at the corner and I scored the winning shot. How thrilling it was!Although we won the game, we learned an important lesson. We should always respect the opponents and never be proud even after making some achievements. As long as we work as a team and keep going, we will do better.

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